Vesica Of Rex Of Obscurum

-General Info-

-Zanpakuto Name: Eternus Obscurum (Eternal Darkness)

-Family: Darkness/Shadow

-Type: Constant release

-Sealed Description: None

-Camouflage:

-Manifestation-

-Appearance:

Spoiler:

-Personality: Each of Eternus' head represents a different emotion. The left is sorrow, the right is joy and the head in the middle is anger. The heads constantly bicker amongst eachother always biting and snarling.

-Inner World:

Spoiler:

-Connection: Each of the heads of Eternus displays an emotion that Majeh cannot feel.

-Shikai-

-Release Phrase: Pario Niger (Bring Forth The Black)

-Shikai Appearance: The blade of the sword is 3ft long with a 1 1/2ft hilt. There is no guard on the sword, just a slight bump that gives enough room for an eye design where the guard would be. The hilt is a tanish-brown color and at the bottom there is a half ring that can be used to loog through rope-like objects. The blade of the sword is silver

-Shikai Ability: The sword can absorb in darkness as well as emitt it's own for an attack. When the blade absorbs in the darkness it will appear at the base of the blade and work it's way up to the tip. The darkness stored in the blade, Majeh can use as he pleases. He can fire it out of his hand, create a fog, make a barrier, etc. But with each use of the darkness, reducess the amount stored in his sword. With each charging post makes it so that 6in of the blade is filled in at a time. So in six posts the blade is completly black.



-Bankai-
[[Reserved for Captain class shinigami, unless it is trained for.]]

-Zanpakuto's full name: Eternus Obscurum of Niger Rex (Eternal Darkness Of The Black King)

-Bankai Appearance: The Zanpaku-to becomes two swords, both looking the same as before. Now the eye design glows a blood red and a 4ft long chain links through the half ring on the bottom of the hilt and wraps around the forearms of Majeh. An armor of darkness forms over the body of majeh as well. There is no helmet to it, just the feet, legs, chest, arms, and gauntles. The armor itself starts off white. His reiatsu, which is pitch black, also become visible and he starts to breathe out a dark mist

-Bankai Ability: The swords still absorb in the darkness around him, but this time at a faster pace, by twice the speed. The armor is also a storage device for the darkness as well. The darkness starts at the feet and work it's way up to the legs, into the chest, out to the arms and then finally reaches the guantles. Which makes a 5 post charge until the armor is fully black. The same rule applies as before, when Majeh uses any of the darkness stored in either his armor or swords it will subtract the dakness from where ever he has used it from. Though when fighting at night, the absorbson rate is almost twice as fast.

-Techniques:
Name: Niger Incendia Super Nos (Black Fire Upon Us)
Ability: When the blade of the sword is full, Majeh can send out a wave of darkness that acts as if it were fire. Since it isn't actual fire it can resist water and ice. The darkness spreads over where other darkness resides. When the darkness touches something it will start to slowly eat away at their body and stop when the duration is over. Where ever the fire struck, the skin will turn black and that part will be fairly resistant to movement. Though the attack is stronger when in Bankai. Majeh can control the Black Fire of his own free will.
Duration: 3 posts
Cooldown: 6 posts
Level: Shikai + Bankai

Name: Abyssus Telum (Hell's Arrow)
Ability: When the armor Majeh wears is full, wings of darkness will sprout from his back and pull out all of the darkness from his being Maneh would then point both of his swords towards his opponent. The wings of darkness then shoot back into his armor and fires out through his swords and towards his opponent in the form of a beam of darkness. This will initaily take three posts until firing. One post for the wings to sprout out. One post to aim the swords. And the final post for the darkness to rush into his body and travel through the swords. Which is close to as powerful as a GRC from the Quatra Espada.
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 6 posts
Level: Bankai

Is this all in latin?

Just the name of the techs and Zanpaku-to. Do you need a translation next to it?

Yes please.

Done.

Yoshirou Akiyama wrote:

Majeh wrote:

-General Info-

-Zanpakuto Name: Eternus Obscurum (Eternal Darkness)

-Family: Darkness/Shadow

-Type: Constant release

-Sealed Description: None

-Camouflage:

-Manifestation-

-Appearance:

Spoiler:

-Personality: Each of Eternus' head represents a different emotion. The left is sorrow, the right is joy and the head in the middle is anger. The heads constantly bicker amongst eachother always biting and snarling.

-Inner World:

Spoiler:

-Connection: Each of the heads of Eternus displays an emotion that Majeh cannot feel.

-Shikai-

-Release Phrase: Pario Niger (Bring Forth The Black)

-Shikai Appearance: The blade of the sword is 3ft long with a 1 1/2ft hilt. There is no guard on the sword, just a slight bump that gives enough room for an eye design where the guard would be. The hilt is a tanish-brown color and at the bottom there is a half ring that can be used to loog through rope-like objects. The blade of the sword is silver

-Shikai Ability: The sword can absorb in darkness as well as emitt it's own for an attack. When the blade absorbs in the darkness it will appear at the base of the blade and work it's way up to the tip. The darkness stored in the blade, Majeh can use as he pleases. He can fire it out of his hand, create a fog, make a barrier, etc. But with each use of the darkness, reducess the amount stored in his sword. With each charging post makes it so that 6in of the blade is filled in at a time. So in six posts the blade is completly black.

Just make sure not to go overboard with the amount of darkness. I'll be watching you to make sure you don't "accidently" use too much. :p


-Bankai-
[[Reserved for Captain class shinigami, unless it is trained for.]]

-Zanpakuto's full name: Eternus Obscurum of Niger Rex (Eternal Darkness Of The Black King)

-Bankai Appearance: The Zanpaku-to becomes two swords, both looking the same as before. Now the eye design glows a blood red and a 4ft long chain links through the half ring on the bottom of the hilt and wraps around the forearms of Majeh. An armor of darkness forms over the body of majeh as well. There is no helmet to it, just the feet, legs, chest, arms, and gauntles. The armor itself starts off white. His reiatsu, which is pitch black, also become visible and he starts to breathe out a dark mist

Does the dark mist do anything? Or is it just for show, not even thick enough to obscure anyone's vision?

Just for show. If it did anything I would of stated it in the Ability

-Bankai Ability: The swords still absorb in the darkness around him, but this time at a faster pace, by twice the speed. The armor is also a storage device for the darkness as well. The darkness starts at the feet and work it's way up to the legs, into the chest, out to the arms and then finally reaches the guantles. Which makes a 5 post charge until the armor is fully black. The same rule applies as before, when Majeh uses any of the darkness stored in either his armor or swords it will subtract the dakness from where ever he has used it from. Though when fighting at night, the absorbson rate is almost twice as fast.

Same as shikai ability.

Yes but to a bit more of an extent and works faster, kinda like Byakuya.
-Techniques:
Name: Niger Incendia Super Nos (Black Fire Upon Us)
Ability: When the blade of the sword is full, Majeh can send out a wave of darkness that acts as if it were fire. Since it isn't actual fire it can resist water and ice. The darkness spreads over where other darkness resides. When the darkness touches something it will start to slowly eat away at their body and stop when the duration is over. Where ever the fire struck, the skin will turn black and that part will be fairly resistant to movement.
Duration: 3 posts
Cooldown: 4 posts
Level: Shikai + Bankai

You're going to have to place a few restrictions on this, if you want me to approve it. This is a darkness type zan, and this is a fire type tech (despite it being hell fire.)

Edited this now.

Name: Abyssus Telum (Hell's Arrow)
Ability: When the armor Majeh wears is full, wings of darkness will sprout from his back and pull out all of the darkness from his being Maneh would then point both of his swords towards his opponent. The wings of darkness then shoot back into his armor and fires out through his swords and towards his opponent in the form of a beam of darkness. Which is close to as powerful as a GRC from the Primera Espada.
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 6 posts
Level: Bankai

Just no. The tech is fine, but no way in hell is it as powerful as a GRC from a Primera Espada, especially when it has no charge.

There is a charge time, as it is stated it says that may armor needs to be full of darkness which means a 5 post charge.

I meant a charge beyond that. A post where you have the wings spread would be acceptable as a charge time, to ready the energy for the blast. It's like a warning, similar to the kind they would get with a GRC powered blast.

Also it can't be as powerful as a primera. That's a CC class unit. Try Quinta or Quarta.

As for the black fire, Make the edit into your first post as well, and remember stronger people will be more resistant to it's effects. Also, Either make the cooldown longer, or you can't collect darkness while it's active. Because you could fill the sword while it's going, wait a post, then shoot it off again.

Edited.

Added three posts of charge time? Nice.

Approved.