Yari to Gogouyo [FINISHED]

-General Info-

-Zanpakuto Name:Yari no Kougi(when Yari is in control), Gogouyo no Gekido(when Gogouyo is in control), Yari to
Gogouyo(When Akira is in control). Note:they are all EXACTLY the same, but with different names.
-Family:Fire.

-Type:Melee (Lesser), Projectile Kidou (Main), Yari. Melee(Main),Projectile Kido(Lesser),Gogouyo.
-Sealed Description:

Spoiler:

-Camouflage: None

-Manifestation-
-Appearance:
Yari
Gogouyo

-Personality:Yari no Kougi & Gogouyo no Gekido are insane, much like there master, in the sense that he has three personalities. One, Called Yari, is a clam, collected, careful person, never fighting unless needed, and always thinking about how to quickly end the fight so as not to hurt anyone, and prefering Ranged attacks to up close fighting, hence him being a spear that can shoot "Spears of Fire". Gogouyo, on the other hand, is a burning spirit of fire and rage, ever bent upon destroying everything in sight. Although his Zan is exactly the same as Yari's, Gogouyo's is more bent upon melee attacks, and therefore his other techniques are less effective. The third and final personalitiy is Akira himself, a blend of both Yari and Gogouyo, and when HE is in control, his Zan is called Yari to Gogouyo(Yari and Gogouyo), which mirrors his personalitiy, both calm and collected, yet sadistic and hateful. His Zan is exactly like Yari's.
Note:I have only ONE Zan. It calls itself a different name for each personality in control at the time, and tailors itself to fit said personality, but it is the same Zan.


-Inner World:
Inner world
A rolling lush paradise, this landscape is constantly changing, much like Akiras personality, but always somewhat resmbles this landscape. When Yari is in control, the land flourishes, and is even more beautiful, but when Gogouyo is in control, the landscape withers and dies, burning itself to the ground to grow anew.

-Connection:Yari to Gogouyo represents Akiras whole soul, both the violent and destructive side, and the calm, careful,shy yet bold side. Kinda like Yin and yang.

-Shikai-

-Release Phrase:Burst, Yari to Gogouyo

-Shikai Appearance:
Shikai
Yari to Gogouyo's shikai state is that of a black hafted spear, with a black blade on top, and silver dragon just below the blade.

-Shikai Ability:
Yari to Gogouyo can be used for both melee attacks, ranged attacks, and some limited defensive abilities for the blade can become covered in fire, and has several techniques taking advantage of this effect, as well as increasing Akiras already massive strength and speed.
-Techniques:

Name:Spears of Flame
Ability: Flame Envelpoes the spear blade, and shoots foawrds in smaller, spear shaped projectiles. Its effective range is around 35 feet in Shikai.
Duration:1 post.
Cooldown:0 posts.
Level:Shikai.

Name:Shield of Flames
Ability:A Shield of fire appeasr in front of Akira, blocking away most attacks. It is 6 feet wide by 6 feet long, and only two inches thick.
Duration:Two uses only(Shikai & Bankai).
Cooldown:3 posts. after two sues, cannot be use again.
Level:Shikai.

Akira Fumio wrote:

-General Info-

-Zanpakuto Name:Yari no Gogouyo

-Family:Fire.

-Type:Melee, Projectille Kidou,Fire,Limited defense.

While 2 might be okay, you'd have to have a heavy slant towards one or the other even with that, 4 is way to many. Also, fire is just the element, not really the type.

Btw, as your main ability is to shoot off spears, it would be a projectile or ranged type mainly. Defensive would be the lesser slant, As you'd just be using a stage of your main ability that is useful in melee combat.

-Sealed Description:

Spoiler:

-Camouflage: None

-Manifestation-
-Appearance:
Yari
Gogouyo

-Personality:Yari no Gogouyo is insane, much like his master, in the sense that he has two personalities. One, Called Yari, is a clam, collected, careful person, never fihgitng unless needed, and always thinking about how to quickly end the fight so as not to hurt anyone.However, When angered (which take considerable effort), He turns ito Gugouyo, a spirit of fire and burning rage, bent upion destroying everthing and anything it can see. Yari usually can control him, but lately he ahs begun to exert more self control, evne gogin so far as to take over in the middle of a fight and nearly get Akira killed.

-Inner World:
Inner world
A rolling lush paradise, this landscape is constantly chaning, much like Akiras personality, but always somewhat resmbles this landscape. When Yari is in control, the land flourishes, and is even more beautiful, but when Gogouyo is in control, the landscape withers and dies, birning itself to the ground to grow anew.

-Connection:Yari no Gogouyo represents Akiras whole soul, both the violent and destructive side, and the calm, careful creative side. Kinda like Yin and yang.

-Shikai-

-Release Phrase:Burst, Yari no Gogouyo

-Shikai Appearance:
Shikai
Yari no Gogouyo's shikai state is that of a black ahfted spear, with a black blade on top, and silver dragon just below the blade.

Text description as well, Good job.

-Shikai Ability:
Yari no Gogouyo can be used for both melee attacks, ranged attacks, and some limited defensive abilities for the blade can become covered in fire and is able to shoot "Fire Spears" from itself, As well as form a Dome of fire around Akira, aloowing him to blokc out most attacks.

So the base ability is to wrap itself in fire, and launch spears from itself? You don't have to register that as a technique if it's the ability, just so you know. Also, you can use it more than once every 2 posts, you could probably use it something like once a post or more, depending on the strength of these spears.

As a former third seat however, you wouldn't really have 2 abilities, so Dome of fire has to stay a tech, and be removed from the ability section.

-Techniques:

Name:Spears of fire
Ability: Flame Envelpoes the spear blade, and shoots foawrds in smaller, spear shaped projectiles. Its effective radius is around 35 feet.
Duration:1 post.
Cooldown:2 posts.
Level:Shikai.
This can be removed, as i said. Also, It'd be effective range, not radius.

Name:Dome of Flames
Ability:A dome of fire surrounds Akira, about 16 feet in diameter, knocking away most attacks.
Duration:2 posts.
Cooldown:4 posts.
As this is a zan with an offensive base ability, this technique is far to large of a defensive technique. Reduce Diameter drastically, and duration to something like one use, one block.

Final thing..Fix spelling and grammar.

Edited.

Done! Finallly.